Wednesday, October 11, 2017

Taller Trees Comments

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As the oak tree grows taller
from the tiny acorn
It catches more wind and
more birds perch on branches
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Rini Shibu
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 October 2017

THE TALLER A PERSON A TREE THE GIRAFFE have you seen THE QUICKER IT FALLS IN THE LEAST BIT OF CALAMITY AAJ YEH OAK LEYLEGEE J AAN HUMAAREE BHEE HUNSTEY RAHOE SABHEE

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Rini Shibu 25 October 2017

Thanks dear poet.. Good lines

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Ash Adetayo 12 October 2017

An excellent poem Rini

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Rini Shibu 12 October 2017

Thanks Ash..

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 12 October 2017

It's a thoughtful poem.thank u for sharing this poem.10+++

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Rini Shibu 12 October 2017

Thanks a lot soumya Rini

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 October 2017

Hi rini, Very poignant poem. The taller you grow, the easier it is to fell you; the more vulnerable you become. Beautifully written. Very effective use of words. Brevity is one of the strengths of the poems of Rini. A full 100+++

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Rini Shibu 12 October 2017

Thanks a lot glad you liked it

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Lamar Cole 11 October 2017

This is a very thought invoking poem about an oak tree.

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Rini Shibu 11 October 2017

Thanks for your comments Lam.. Rini

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Ravi Sathasivam 11 October 2017

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it.

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Rini Shibu 11 October 2017

Thank you so much Ravi for your encouraging words

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 October 2017

Such an interesting poem, Rini.....

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Rini Shibu 11 October 2017

Thanks Bernard for reading this poem

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 October 2017

But a strong storm is enough to uproot it from the ground Every height is limited on this world.. and every thing decays in course of time. Still one must dream to be taller and never boast about. Lovely poem Rini dear. Thanks for the sharing.

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Rini Shibu 11 October 2017

Thanks Subhas.. Should never boast

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 October 2017

Oak tree grows taller from tiny acorn and while this grows much taller then taller then more birds too perch on branches. Very wise and beautifully presented this imagery of oak tree.10

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Rini Shibu 11 October 2017

Thank you so much for your comments Kumar.. Rini

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