Saturday, July 28, 2007

Tall Trees Comments

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Tall trees all around
If I climb up will I fall down,
Up & up & up it makes me go
Till I scream let me go
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Kayla Lines
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Afzal Shauq 22 July 2009

hmmm there is forest of trees and you are blocked and no way to go around or out...sure..this is your success and dream like poem..liked its way of writing and idea is sweet and deep..again..

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Kayla Lines 24 August 2007

I am Kayla the writer of this poem and in the second last line it is tear as in cry not tear as in rip

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