Sunday, August 14, 2011

Talking To A Pillow Inside Room 22 Comments

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I lay my hands on you; fingers intertwined
as if I am about to utter a prayer
The sky outside is quite blue
but I wish it was a little grayer
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Estrellita Dedel
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 11 September 2011

WHERE IS ROOM 22 I AM INTRIGUED YOU ARE GOOD AT TELLING EXPERIENCES AND EMOTIONS FAMILIAR TO EVERYBODY BUT IGNORE ANG GANDA NG TULA MO MABUHAY KA

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 11 September 2011

YOU ARE AMAZING, YOU EXPRESS THOUGHTS WELL. YOU ARE GOOD AT PUTTING INTO WORDS EMOTIONS AND EXPERIENCES WHAT OTHERS LIKE US FEEL BUT IGNORE. GANDA NG TULA MO MABUHAY KA. HEY, WHAT IS, , WHERE IS ROOM 22(IM INTRIGUED)

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Anshul Gupta 19 August 2011

That was creative... I liked it a lot. I have always believed that we owe so much to these so called non living things. This poem gives them their due...

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Estrellita Dedel

Estrellita Dedel

Davao City, Philippines
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