Tuesday, March 24, 2015

Talking To A Fish Comments

Rating: 3.0

I was walking by a river,
when fish caught my eye;
He asked me how I’m doing,
and would I like to take dip,
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Brian Stafford
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Bri Edwards 15 November 2019

bank/think saved this for me. the poem is cute. i hope readers know the idioms (i guess that's what they are) in lines 8 & 9. to MyPoemList. bri :) i also added two points to your 'score' for having the same first name as i have.

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