Saturday, December 12, 2009

Talking Talking To My Ego… Comments

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Talking, talking to my ego
Tired I fell asleep
Waking up I saw a face grim
Within me- no friendship!
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Unwritten Soul 30 July 2010

Ur pure heart remove the ego...glad the ego only stay for a while...after u woke up u feel somethg missing and hope to change, mean here your heart did not conquered by dark vanity, purity take place...and for me, if u think u dont have any friendship i always with u, be a friend is to accept the friend as they are and try to give a opinion to them to become better and better, it is always better to live in bitter but truth than sweet with lies...i know this is only a poem but it very good dish for us! lol hahahahha

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 24 December 2009

Ingenious, beautiful, well penned. Thanks for sharing. Happy new year.

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Krishnarasa Seshadri 21 December 2009

So how do we conquer this thing? ? Thats what ur poem makes me think! :)

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Bob Blackwell 19 December 2009

Clever poem Kesav, just shows how our tricky ego does everything, to be the centre of attention. Bob

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Janani Ashwin 16 December 2009

Your poem is very much meaningful and you written with great interest and concerns. This way you explain how you talking to your ego level and at the same times you tried and pacify it is beautiful in writing. An attempt at writing good what you think.

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Indira Renganathan 16 December 2009

Original words in your original style without 'ego'....a humble poem

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 16 December 2009

hehe! absolutely witty. it shows how two-edged sword our ego is. wonderful. loved it. thank you sir. 'In the vanity of my empty froth, I forget the substance I am. And in the ego of my own little self... I forget the universe I am.'

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 15 December 2009

ego..does it not have anything positive in it...a wonderful and thought provoking poem...your style and craftmanship shines sir...into my favs

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Ejaz Khan 15 December 2009

You better be careful next time, why hurt that sensitive giant friend, a great message Kesav and ten for that!

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Mamta Agarwal 14 December 2009

you went off to sleep with a difficult companion. nowonder you didn't wake up fresh. a very deep message here given by using humour. ego is foreaver interfering with our perception of ourselves and others. We are ready to jump at any trivial slight. its so difficult to live with pompous people and their tantrums.you hold a mirroir to your readers.10 thanks loved it Mamta

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Reshma Ramesh 14 December 2009

hahaha! loved this one...........

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Sandhya S N 13 December 2009

Sisnce you told no tantrums over it... the ego.. very beautiful poem regards sandhya

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Catrina Heart 13 December 2009

Ego is a monster that eats the rational thinking of a person which also destroys relationship etc.......to avoid we must learn how to be humble and have a long strand of patience....nice one! ! !

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Sonya Florentino 13 December 2009

ah, the Ego, they can be so tiresome! and needy! but we can't get rid of them...or can we?

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Mandara Pookal 12 December 2009

Cute concept of a thought that is imaginative and intuitive and holds well...s no tantrums..........mandara

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Milena Veleva 12 December 2009

'I saw a face grim within me' - be very patient, talking to your Ego, Kesav. A good write.

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Miriam Maia Padua 12 December 2009

great write, Sir....flows with great meaning food for thoughts...very realistic... Ego is one of the hindrances why we can't accept mistakes right away..accept defeat.. best enemy of a man....Ego..... but since one know how to talk with his ego...means his ego cant dominate him... fight with ego and let the soft spot of our heart/mind overule thanks for this write, Sir....makes me ponder... 10++++ Lovelots, Maia

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Shakir Gumnam 12 December 2009

Don't care much about this Miss Ego, she always revolves around herself and too sensitive, thus came the expression 'Ego-centric' Thanks for this lovely write, meaningful like always! 100

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Sadiqullah Khan 12 December 2009

That better needs to be left alone, for a sound sleep. Good gesture.10

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

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