! ! ! Talking From The Inside! ! ! Comments

Can someone elaborate or do the summary of this for me. Thanks

From the inside out...i think that you did great on this writing..all the feeling and emotion...looking from the outside...but lost to the inner sight of the other...awsome.....thanks.. ~^..^

This is a really good poem. it speaks to me

very intense...nice poem

Insightful poem Youngsters really do well I remember one verse written in Tamil Language, Thirukkural (421) Wisdom is a weapon to ward off destruction, it is an inner fortess which enemies can not destroy Well written dear child…keep focussing

Hi etc, You've penned a very clever verse here that moves from stanza to stanza with the right amount of disclosure on each line. I really like the way you shift from (you, me, us your) at just the right times. Nice write. Cheers, Frank

from the heart. very nice. great work! ! !

a science of astonishment when you realize you would have done any thing but face the lie of the other..yet you did...iip

Great poem, so full of emotions. Thank you for sharing it with me and continued success with your writing!

Outstanding emotion in every line, i like your style. It bubbles with talent. A Well expressed 10+

great poem i'll say its a two thums up, it had a nice flow...to it keep up the good work

Absolutely astounding write! so much pain, so young! hopefully the warrior princess inside you has calmed, if only a little. Great write, worth every bit of the lousy 10 that I'm able to give. thanx

Wow ur so unique...i was confused at first but in the end it ties together! ! 10+++ DLG

No matter how things apear on the out side ther never the same in side. People only see what there looking at they never thing of how agly you feel in side. I have felt lost and is so deep I was going to dround but I have found theres more ti this life then what I fight. like this -Great right!

wow... i love it! very good job Tyease. =) keep it up please. =)