Talkin' Pretty Girl Blues Comments

Paul, you redeemed yourself. i like this one veryvery much. id love to hear it played (see if you can set my 21 & rising to some chords) i think its thirsty for some notes. reading more now Sus.

This is such an honest and sad lament of a lonesome Cowboy Paul, Don't worry you are young, very young and recognise your mistakes, so I assume you will learn from them, that is why we make them imo. When the time for new Pretty girl to take away your blues is right, she will appear. Believe me. I like the flow of this poem. You show a different style, which means you are capable of much. 10 from Rocking her own cowboy in her arms, soothingly, . Feeling his pain Loving his, Enigmatic charms. Tai