Friday, February 26, 2016

Talk The Truth Comments

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Truth (Part I)
Talk the truth
From creation,
to the 'fruit'
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Atasha Williams
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Sarah Shahzad 12 December 2019

this is a very beautiful and touching piece thank you so much for sharing this masterpiece, like it.. hey i'm write as well so please check my site too :)

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Adeline Foster 04 May 2016

Shall be looking for the second installment. If you really are looking for truth, you must go to the source, the oldest book if you really want to know. Don't rely on the opinions of those who only can give their own thoughts. Read mine - If There Be No God - Adeline

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Juan Olivarez 25 March 2016

Very well written, absolutely the truth. write more Atasha.

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Clarence Prince 14 March 2016

Maybe it is fair to say, let alone the past and consider the future; even for God who works patiently sake! Thanks for sharing, Atasha!

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Atasha Williams 14 March 2016

Thank you Clarence :)

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 March 2016

Too much anger is shown due to injustice that men suffer in this world. Waiting for part II.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 February 2016

Too much anger in this poem for no rhyme nor reason change with the times madam

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 February 2016

Black people ended up to be such a damnned race, Is Black traders who sold their brothers in the first place, We have no one else to blame but our forefathers For the curse that befalls generations hereafter. Beautiful dear Atasha . we have to write about all the injustices in the world, in the history and the injustices of manipulating other human beings for their private profit. God bless you for this poem. tony

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Atasha Williams 26 February 2016

yes we do Tony... they distract us with IPhones and Internet, our children are lost and know not of their history. Sad huh: (

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 February 2016

Say the truth and let the devil be ashame! Nice work.

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Atasha Williams 26 February 2016

Thank u Eddie :)

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