Thursday, May 7, 2015

Talk Over Tea Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her mother poured tea

her father sat talking
about his day at work
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Pamela Sinicrope 04 June 2017

I enjoy your style of writing. The family conversation while eating. Poo young girl being tormented by her parents and a sibling while she's trying to daydream about a boy....a beginning first love. You've even managed to mix in some family dynamics here that tell allot more of the story about this family and all families.

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Rajnish Manga 18 April 2017

Very interesting conversation within family members at tea. Everybody is anxious to know if the elder of the two sisters has got a boy friend. Kind of a thriller. Thanks.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 06 October 2015

Verily, a good parent's love and care

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Lyn Paul 07 May 2015

Wonderful storyline. After all the negative for Elaine I would understand if she ran a way with John. Very much enjoyed. Thank you

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Jaishree Nair 07 May 2015

The secret of a boyfriend that a teenage girl hides from her family.Thanks for sharing.

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just a simple and nice poem about the feelings of members of family about a boy friend, a young teen age girl goes to have.. Thank you for sharing..

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