Her mother poured tea
her father sat talking
about his day at work
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Very interesting conversation within family members at tea. Everybody is anxious to know if the elder of the two sisters has got a boy friend. Kind of a thriller. Thanks.
Wonderful storyline. After all the negative for Elaine I would understand if she ran a way with John. Very much enjoyed. Thank you
The secret of a boyfriend that a teenage girl hides from her family.Thanks for sharing.
just a simple and nice poem about the feelings of members of family about a boy friend, a young teen age girl goes to have.. Thank you for sharing..
I enjoy your style of writing. The family conversation while eating. Poo young girl being tormented by her parents and a sibling while she's trying to daydream about a boy....a beginning first love. You've even managed to mix in some family dynamics here that tell allot more of the story about this family and all families.