Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Tuesday, May 15, 2018

Tales Of The Old Town (Part 03) Comments

Rating: 5.0

A strange new girl moved into town;
she came from who knows where?
She tried to take her life one day;
she thought we didn't care.
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Kim Barney
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Kim Barney 10 June 2018

Finally, one can load pictures onto poems on PH again!

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Kim Barney 19 May 2018

I had a picture to go with this poem when I first submitted it, but the picture did not load. I have tried many times over the past several days, and even tried different pictures, with no success.

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Spock The Vegan 16 May 2018

Yes, as Kelly said, it's time for US to forgive and heal. Also remember the Great Equalizer is coming.

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Kim Barney 16 May 2018

It's hard to forgive something like that, but I'm trying. Thanks for the comment.

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Kelly Kurt 16 May 2018

If this is more than apocryphal, it is horrible. The last stanza should be a lesson for many.

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Kim Barney 16 May 2018

It is indeed all true. All fact, no fiction. Thanks, Kelly, for the comment.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 May 2018

Dear Kim, such a great ballad...10++++

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Kim Barney 16 May 2018

Thanks, Bernard. The comment is appreciated.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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