Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Sunday, May 20, 2018

Tales Of The Old Town (Part 01) ...[revised Version] Comments

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Now listen, friends, and I will tell
Of things you've never heard.
But very soon you'll know them well.
Don't think they're all absurd.
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Grace Diane Jessen 21 May 2018

I have enjoyed reading your four Tales very much! Good attention to rhyme and meter. Good stories. I would like to know more about the scout story.

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Kim Barney 23 May 2018

Thank you. I really do doubt I'll tell more about the story of scout activities mentioned. At least that is not my current intention.

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Kim Barney 20 May 2018

I have now restored the missing stanza. Somehow, when I copied the poem from my word processor, I missed the first stanza altogether, but all eight stanzas are here now.

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Kim Barney 20 May 2018

A stanza is missing! There are supposed to be eight stanzas (I thought) and I only see seven!

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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