Lounging on the throne of heaven
God …so high above the rest of us
I see another throne going up
Aspiring to be compared
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Provocative poem, especially when you take on the person of a fallen angel and get under the skin of that angel, revealing feelings and attitudes. I do believe there is a highly intelligent but devious and invisible 'God of this world' - the only explanation (in my opinion) for the craziness of war, humans killing each other by the millions. Murder and war are not humanitarian, not normal. In one biblical phrase Satan is called the 'Prince of the power of the air' - perhaps influencing attitudes, broadcasting and inciting hatred, stoking the fires of suspicion, distrust, revenge. Perhaps Satan's greatest success is influencing people to not believe in a caring Creator God - many intelligent people view that idea as archaic and primitive religion. I don't do religion but know God as a friend. Your poems are certainly original and creative, with nice use of language. You have depth.
nice and nice and nice! the smell of heroic poem is inside this work. epic, ..the tale of darkness and light! like it.