Tales Of A Child Comments

thank you.. will surely take to correction

Thank you for your support...I will surely take to correction

Rewrite this stuff in lines, try using rhymes or repeated words to add emphasis; then you become a poet. You also need more imagery! Read other poems and poets, too! You shall surely be fine! Welcome on board! ! ! Mar' aban hallan wa saalan! ! !

Wonderful thoughts, Abdulsamad. A nice style and rhythm. My only suggestion would be to lay it out in single lines and not paragraph form. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. Peace

hello, members please I need your comments about this poem... thank you