Tales From A Passing Cloud Comments

Thomas, I know I have already commented on this very excellent poem, but would love you to check out mine entitled Birds Eye View, with a similar theme. Thanks.

Tom -this is absolutely brilliant. You don't need anymore practise. Free verse that says something.Profound and impactful. I could become a convert to this quality-10

Brilliant Thomas. Free verse at its best. I've had a dabble (Oblivion, From a Distance, Becoming) , to name just three) , but it doesn't come naturally to me. Clearly, you are a master of both.