Wednesday, September 20, 2017

Tale Of A Psychopath Comments

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Love was all he tried to carve
Due to rejection he was left to starve
He crowned you his queen, his only muse
You fed him theatrical words, he was being used
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Michael Ordia
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Dr Antony Theodore 02 January 2018

Your rejection of him was mantra in his head Pain made his heart shudder Rejected by all except his late mother.. Rejection is very very painful...... but thinking of suicide is no option.... such people we have to help by telling that they are worth...... there are so many in this world to love him. that belongs to our noble duty to save one in rejection and depression..... thank you dear poet for this serious poem. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 September 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Ordia. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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