Saturday, December 7, 2013

Tale Of A Diplodocus Comments

Rating: 5.0

A Diplodocus
One day lost focus
And fell into a pit.
It couldn’t rise
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Susy Evelyne
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Stephen Katona 17 June 2014

Thank you for this lovely flowing rhyme. I really enjoyed it.

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Paul Brookes 17 December 2013

Loved it still laughing a well put together comic rhyme going straight on my favourite list Thanks for sharing

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 December 2013

Wow fabulous rhymin excavation then, soo enjoyable to read to d end upto d dino discovery. I always admire such rare finds of poetry. I dont like common place.

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John Brown 11 December 2013

This one made me giggle.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 09 December 2013

I'm amazed the way you script a truth in brush of fun!

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