Sunday, July 13, 2008

Taking Revenge Comments

Rating: 4.8

I could've had all I ever wanted
You would've stayed my friend
But I didn't want to bully
That's how our friendship did end
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jools England
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Darkness Everywhere 10 February 2009

really good poem 10 out of 10 well done

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Blue Eyes 27 December 2008

good for u girl nice work.i love the poemcoz it seems out of a personal experience

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Kesav Easwaran 13 December 2008

talking of taking revenge...well, nice for the read, Jools...but it appears to be your decision...you only turned your back on... so where does the revenge come in here? laugh it away, young friend... a well written poem, of course...every word there carries lot of emotions...lot of pains...10

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Shy Powder 13 July 2008

Oh god, do you mean I need to go deeper into hiding? (ha ha, joke) ..

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Catrina Heart 13 July 2008

Nobody wins in a battle of revenge.....it is just a selfish and egoistic pride that wins over a battle of childish retribution.

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