I could've had all I ever wanted
You would've stayed my friend
But I didn't want to bully
That's how our friendship did end
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good for u girl nice work.i love the poemcoz it seems out of a personal experience
talking of taking revenge...well, nice for the read, Jools...but it appears to be your decision...you only turned your back on... so where does the revenge come in here? laugh it away, young friend... a well written poem, of course...every word there carries lot of emotions...lot of pains...10
Oh god, do you mean I need to go deeper into hiding? (ha ha, joke) ..
Nobody wins in a battle of revenge.....it is just a selfish and egoistic pride that wins over a battle of childish retribution.
really good poem 10 out of 10 well done