Sunday, June 18, 2017

Taking My Very Last Breath Of Air Comments

Rating: 2.5

Taking my very last
breath of air and will I see
your temperate smile grow to full capacity
when old age ravishes me
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Gert Strydom
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Jazib Kamalvi 22 June 2017

A great poem on man's real future. Thanks

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Rini Shibu 18 June 2017

Well written about the end..you may like my poem old age

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Gert Strydom

Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
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