Wednesday, May 13, 2015

Taking My Love For Granted Comments

Rating: 3.3

I gave you my all,
I showed you my all,
But what did you give in return?
A broken heart,
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Charity Nduhiu 05 November 2015

I imagine your feelings its so sad for people taking advantage of others.

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Kate Lechoe 05 November 2015

Really painful indeed. It is bad situation where one person is serious and the other is joking.

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Kinyua Karanja 08 July 2015

Great poem it has just awakened my feelings of similar situation i underwent sometime back. Very painful for persona for being betrayed.

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Kate Lechoe 08 July 2015

Thanks Karanja. Betrayal is indeed painful..

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 June 2015

Sad and nicely done.Liked the flow of lines.Keep inking.

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