Friday, June 22, 2007

Taking Me Down To Be There With Her Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pale, cold
in shrouds of satin,
she lies there still
in her metal coffin,
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dead before I died
COMMENTS
Poornima Kanasen 22 June 2007

Hey ya, It is fantastic..I loved each and every bit of your poem..A departure that caused another one..Keep up your good work... With lots of best wishes and love, K.Poornima..

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