Taking Flight. Comments

Evocative and distinctive, this tribute to dawn is delightfully uncluttered. I particularly liked: 'Night now is bound and captured ............................ by morning.' and 'Daylight reshapes every shadow .......................... of night.' An inspiring poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

up up and away even the birds can fly as high as Fay. I love the poem.. n the form.

a new fight everday a struggle each moment a morning god sent the blissful ray turning in gold the plinth gray wow what a poem.......keep it up

Out of the darkness, the wee hours of morn a glimmer of grey heralds a new dawn slowly nights cloak is fading away the shadows of night, have now come out to play

This is a glorious mood piece, Fay. Your phrasing and imagery is superb and captures the moment so well.

After reading your poem, i wish every morning to be as poetical as this poem, fay!

Very poetic for the break of day, Fay.. Cornwalls beauty gets you that way :) Andy 10

Lovely! I lived in Cornwall and know how inspiring it's beauty is. My memories came gushing back as i read this piece. Thanks for stirring my memories.

Brilliant imagery Fay...I feel every moment of that break of dawn.....