Friday, November 16, 2012

Taking Control Comments

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Mother dearest Father too
You do anger me very much you do
I have tried too
Console with you indeed
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April Swan
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 23 November 2012

A poignant poem of being given strict treatment. As a poem so remarkably rhymin n nice.

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Leonardo David Tay 16 November 2012

My will is mine, I shall not make it soft for you. - Aeschylus, Agamemnon. The poem reminded me of this, only the self control in your poem was a type to forgive, if I understood correctly. So really, I loved it, as I believe you expressed strong dominance over yourself.

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