Tuesday, October 3, 2017

Taking Chances Comments

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Do you watch and see all that I can see?
Do you bleed the same true red?
Do you wonder with the same closed eyes?
Do you feel much more than what is said?
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Sarah Persson
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Pallab Chaudhury 03 October 2017

Take chances to decide the next course of action... Beautifully penned! All the best.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 October 2017

Feeling much more than saying in words is amazing really. World is in war with vices and pollution. We need to think more regarding purity. If we miss those chances we'll never know.We should grasp chances in hand as soon as possible and grasp wisdom. This is amazingly drafted poem is shared here...10

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Sarah Persson 03 October 2017

Always inspiring comments Kumarmani, thank you. Sometimes the world just spins too fast and we need to take the time to take in all the good in it, the bits that slip through our fingers.

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