Wednesday, December 17, 2008

Taker Of The Weak, The Comments

Rating: ★4.0

There are sand-dunes surrounding my dream-castle
And e'ery wind spills the dust into my cool chambers
The ones I hold dear seem to have cracks in the rock
Solid walls I have built with the years
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Elbert Matt Loubser
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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 09 July 2010

A well imagined poem, I wish I had more to say, but I'm still taking it all in.

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Fiona Davidson 19 January 2009

I love this poems descrptive images...great write Elbert as always...thank you...Fi

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Michelle Melody 05 January 2009

Added to my favorites.

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Joseph Poewhit 17 December 2008

Neurotics build sand castles - Psychotics live in them

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Elbert Matt Loubser

Elbert Matt Loubser

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