Sunday, April 22, 2018

Taken For Granted Comments

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From the moment of conception,
As two cells merge into one.
There's a spark of cosmic energy,
More amazing then the sun.
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Michael Kelsall
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Jess b 06 May 2018

Omg ๐Ÿ˜ keep writing, amazing

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Rachel.W 25 April 2018

That is beautifuly well thought out and I enjoyed reading it. U are gifted with words๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ˜‰

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scott the bro 25 April 2018

absolute intelligence from your beautiful soul filled heart my gud friend proud of ya

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Sam (mummy) 22 April 2018

Beautiful Mick. Proud of you๐Ÿ˜˜

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Tracey Gore 22 April 2018

This is awesome. I am going to use this for an example for my students. So moving, yet raw reality filters through. I think you have a calling Michael.

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Tracey Gore 22 April 2018

What a well thought out, executed and suspense provoking poem. Excellent to use for example for young writers. Proud of you.

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