Sunday, July 20, 2008

Taken Away Comments

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everything seemed to have been taken away
in the blink of an eye
i could have stopped it
but i was too shy
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Carrie Sprouse
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Silence Dogood 12 October 2008

Not bad I like it but it could be improved

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Ron Flowers 24 July 2008

A sad, but lovely poem. Ron

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Carrie Sprouse

Carrie Sprouse

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