Take Your Time Comments
Take your time with your soft tone
And bitter sweet promise,
For your gentle tone claws
At my heart strings, time locks,
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Love with remorse? Confliction? A poem that makes you think! ! Great job
Thank you George. I guess it's the thought that runs through many minds, should we try again? Is it worth it? Thank you for your comments George
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8/2/2025 10:46:54 AM # 1.0.0
Hi sarah, Penetrating ideas/themes, gripping images, and finest rhythm. Marvelous write. Let me just quote: : : At my heart strings, time locks, : : I've looked in your eyes : : And I've searched through the wells, : : Where the walls sink much deeper: : Wow! ! A 100++++