Saturday, March 17, 2012

Take Us To The Death! Comments

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All the age we died everyday
With a lot of pain all the time;
Let us enjoy each moment
With natural-love and friend's rhyme.
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Vikas Tripathi
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Vikas Tripathi 14 April 2012

Thans A Lot To Both Of You........

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Pankajam K 17 March 2012

Yearning for change in the system is presented strongly. Expressing it boldly.

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Rajendran Muthiah 17 March 2012

O you teen-ager poet! You demand an educational system which saves you from carrying loads of books. Your destiny urges you to do something marvellous. You convey fantastic ideas through your poem. Cheers!

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