Friday, December 9, 2005

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Poetry unlocks my mind, it helps me see so clear,
It sharpens up my senses to see the things so dear,
Like children and their joyfulness, loving someone so,
Watching morning breaking, seeing rivers flow,
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Philip Vincent Sanders
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Cynthia Aluning 09 December 2005

Reaching the prime of our age, we treasure every moment of it one day at a time, each step of the way. We try to value whatever things we notice around us, accepting things the easier way than complaining, striving more and living life to the fullest. And what those moments give us...a lesson to learn a value to keep, and we treasure it even more when we put it in writing..inspirigly not obligatory. And the beauty of all these occurences in our lives, they made up a good write. The more emotions (be it good or not good) the better for a good poetry...just what u did on this piece. Awesome.

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Philip Vincent Sanders

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