Take this rose
And dance with it between yr teeth
Take this rose
And never tell me that you love me
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An honest portrait of hurt feelings, the pain is felt behind every word. I can relate with this 100 %.
Gorgeous write accompanied with great imagery. A fascinating poem. Fantastic! 5 Stars full
A deeply poignant and moving poem. Powerful lines that strike one's heart. The images enhanced the beauty of this write. To my Poem List.
While my tears burn it until The phoenix rises....poignantly expressed. Scintillating poetic expression. A wonderful poem....full marks.