Wednesday, May 28, 2008

Take This Pain Away From Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Take a look at me and tell me
Do you see the lies I've been telling
Can you see that all along I've been living a lie
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Bill Smith 29 May 2008

written from the heart, that maes it good enough for me, your pain came across in your words smiffy

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Bill Smith 29 May 2008

written from the heart, that maes it good enough for me, your pain came across in your words smiffy

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Marvin Brato 28 May 2008

Fine work... it got passion and substance! Indeed nobody can make our broken selves again but us! A 10.

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Wesley Cooper 28 May 2008

i like ur poem. splendid! p.s. i like ur name you go by

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