Monday, August 27, 2007

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Greeted by day with a light to my eyes
Focusing for just a moment only to realise that a new day has come
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Saint Seven
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Ben Gieske 27 August 2007

The words rhyming with eyes sets the tone of sameness (a dazed state) . It is my realization that no matter what we have achieved we always arrive back at this point and, as you conclude, the answer lies with someone else. I like the 'sawing nag' and 'a flower I remain'.

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