Sunday, December 1, 2024

Take Rest For A While But Don't Stop Comments

Rating: 5.0

Upon the journey where hopes are found,
every move you make, let bravery surround
the skyline shines, a gentle sign
but effort and hard work are needed to shine.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Gordon Walter 20 December 2024

Inspiring poem, indeed.

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Rebecca Navarre 17 December 2024

Beautifully, beautifully composed! .. And i feel like i'm understating! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 17 December 2024

Absolutely fantastic! .. More beauty and inspiration, than i can find words to say! .. Again love this! ..

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Darren Jkoeryo 16 December 2024

Outstanding poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 December 2024

Wonderful poetic expressions that fuel us to achieve success in life. Very inspiring!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 December 2024

Bravo Asim Enjoyed very much TFS

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 December 2024

An inspiring poem dear Asim ji. Top stars and to my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 December 2024

Effort and hardwork needed to shine. One has to keep going to reach the ultimate goal.

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" The path may twist, but leads to the top." good advice to follow. Top scire

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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