Take Rest For A While But Don't Stop Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Take Rest For A While But Don't Stop

Rating: 5.0

Upon the journey where hopes are found,
every move you make, let bravery surround
the skyline shines, a gentle sign
but effort and hard work are needed to shine.

In the darkness created by fear's hold
keep going ahead, be brave and bold
for right beyond where sight becomes unclear
the end point is near, it is here.

So move with passion, and do not stop,
The path may twist, but leads to the top.

Sunday, December 1, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: motivational,inspirational
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

" The path may twist, but leads to the top." good advice to follow. Top scire

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 December 2024

Effort and hardwork needed to shine. One has to keep going to reach the ultimate goal.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 December 2024

An inspiring poem dear Asim ji. Top stars and to my favourite

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 December 2024

Bravo Asim Enjoyed very much TFS

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Gordon Walter 20 December 2024

Inspiring poem, indeed.

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Rebecca Navarre 17 December 2024

Beautifully, beautifully composed! .. And i feel like i'm understating! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 17 December 2024

Absolutely fantastic! .. More beauty and inspiration, than i can find words to say! .. Again love this! ..

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Darren Jkoeryo 16 December 2024

Outstanding poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 December 2024

Wonderful poetic expressions that fuel us to achieve success in life. Very inspiring!

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