Sunday, May 11, 2008

Take My Life Away... Comments

Rating: 4.5

heavy soul.. deep dark secrets.
regrets in the past.. unknown future ahead.
will you bare with me on this?
will you hold me when my world crashes down?
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Dislocated Heart
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sad Justin, sad, very sad why? why do all this smokin and drinking, if u know ur gonna take ur life away and leave the people that loves and care about you alone? u though of that? i mean, hows it gonna feel if u actually did that and u became addicted and somethings happens to you and ur gone..imagine how ill feel and react... just 2 let u know agian, im there for you. open to me and talk all you want, yell at me, scream, swear idc just tell me something so i can help you take care of urselft and dont anything i wouldnt do, -curly

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Andrew Leclair 11 May 2008

Thats very depressing. But unfortunately, a lot of people can relate. Reading this poem i feel your pain. Its a great poem

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