Take My Life Away... Poem by Dislocated Heart

Take My Life Away...

Rating: 4.5


heavy soul.. deep dark secrets.
regrets in the past.. unknown future ahead.
will you bare with me on this?
will you hold me when my world crashes down?
will you be by myside?

i carry a burden.. tired and confused.
what is life itself?
is it to torture mankind?
must we all suffer then die?
when will there be peace?
never i say..
thats what i believe..

ill go bury myself..
for theres not much to live for.
love? haha thats funny..

ill drink, smoke do whatever it takes..
to take my life away..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

sad Justin, sad, very sad why? why do all this smokin and drinking, if u know ur gonna take ur life away and leave the people that loves and care about you alone? u though of that? i mean, hows it gonna feel if u actually did that and u became addicted and somethings happens to you and ur gone..imagine how ill feel and react... just 2 let u know agian, im there for you. open to me and talk all you want, yell at me, scream, swear idc just tell me something so i can help you take care of urselft and dont anything i wouldnt do, -curly

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Andrew Leclair 11 May 2008

Thats very depressing. But unfortunately, a lot of people can relate. Reading this poem i feel your pain. Its a great poem

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