Take my hand and I'll show you the way
Take my hand and I won't give you away
Just take my hand.
Promise that you'll love me for as long as
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good job here... it made me think... I really like this...easy to read and something that your reader can relate too... well done... this is by far your best. ~CM~
Very Creative lillie continue to 'take your hand' and thoughts to paper Very Nice
your poem is real good and amazing