Tuesday, February 17, 2009

Take My Hand Comments

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Take my hand and I'll show you the way
Take my hand and I won't give you away
Just take my hand.
Promise that you'll love me for as long as
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Lillie Ellis
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Jasmine Dugas 13 July 2009

your poem is real good and amazing

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Callie Rank 25 June 2009

I like this poem! ! Very good! !

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~Crystal Midnight~ 09 June 2009

good job here... it made me think... I really like this...easy to read and something that your reader can relate too... well done... this is by far your best. ~CM~

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The Dreamer 17 May 2009

Very Creative lillie continue to 'take your hand' and thoughts to paper Very Nice

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Zachary Clark 08 May 2009

Draws you in and shows you your feelings I loved it thank you.

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