Take My Hand... Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Take My Hand...

Rating: 5.0


He said walk with me my child,
the road has many rugged miles.
There is thunder, there is rain.
There is compassion, there is gain.
Not by the way of money, not by the
way of fame. But the kind, that brings
the heart, a tender change. This earth
has felt life's strain, and the moonlight
has seen my pain. But the sunlight knows
my name, and the paths to heaven aren't
in vain. Here, nothing stays the same, but
my unending love, will always remain. Walk
with me through this land, come child take
my hand...

Friday, June 4, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: jesus,compassion,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 04 June 2021

1) a soothing poem about the only one we can trust and the greatest love in our life path, beautifully summarized and most sweetly sung, a fitting poem for all of us who believe in Him,5 Stars

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 June 2021

2) masterfully beautiful.and to my Favourites. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 June 2021

' But the sunlight knows my name and the paths to heaven are not in vain'. Beautiful lines from a wonderful poem.

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Kostas Lagos 08 June 2021

If only I could rate your poem with more than five stars! Bravo!

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Varsha M 06 June 2021

This is beautiful internal rhyming poem. I loved the construct, flow and meaning of this poem.

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M Asim Nehal 05 June 2021

Wow. When Almighty takes our hand to guide nothing is like living 100 years. I quote But the sunlight knows my name, and the paths to heaven aren't in vain...5*******

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 June 2021

Liked the title and the closure lines.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 June 2021

An amazing poem of great faith. Very inspiring and propels us to walk with the Lord Almighty. Great spiritual write, Becca. So well crafted and uplifting. To my Poem List.

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