take me to the place
where a waterfall
really is a waterfall
deep dark blue
...
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Allen, You are soooo sentimental, a beliver in the magic of love...take me with you, you plea, Oh, I hope she does...if not, try, try, again...there is always someone out there waiting to be good to you.
Wow, i love how simple the language is. No matter if you are just barily know english you can understand this poem. and it makeas it perfect that way.
I loved the repetitive lines that just exacerbate the feelings of loneliness and yearning. A great write, Allen. I could so easily relate. We want reality, our reality, with someone real, so we can be real in turn. So lovely.