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Dusk chasing the lazy dawn
Sounds of angry skies deafening
Lightning, like a giant snapshot
Blinding your eyes to madness
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this is really nice...i love this poem...I REALLY LIKE THIS..
'Is there any other love in you? Betrayal is the word for sinner Remember my promises? I will hang my neck to your flawless hair Decapitating my head for your moo Enhancing your voices to purer Disjointing my legs for I couldn’t run less Making us the most corrupted pair' This part really caught my attention. I loved every bit of the poem I'd rather be gone than live life without love.
ANOTHER GOOD ONE SULAIMAN FULL OF PASSION AND IMAGINATION.. GOOD LUCK
I can feel you passion in this poem. The imagery is rolling of your tongue into your work. well done it is really hard to do that is writing
Wow! Very descriptive...I love the way you express ur desires.
it's so great. I 'm not online a lot because of my work so I didn't see it when added. I like all the images u put especially: The singing stars will guide us to eternity good luck thanks for informing me about ur new writings & take care
I love the way you blend love and disaster in this poem...almost as if they're one in the same.
Wow this is really good take a look at my first tell me what you think.
Wow. An excellently written piece, very descriptive, nice word choice.
God is it the most passionate of poems....your poetry takes me with you....
A simply beautiful and inspirational piece, with depth and amazing insight
As if you needed a hundred and tenth comment&accolade, Sulaiman, right? ...LOL! Snapshots....pictorial freeze-frames for the minds-eye's banquet of focus and endulgence....as that's what came to MY mind...when first i bit into this brilliant slice of how imagery...commands, and delivers...Outsatanding Work! You 'da main PH man, my friend! FjR
OMG! ! ! I LOVE IT! ! THANKS FOR SHARING KEEP WRITTING YOU'RE AN EXCEPTIONAL POET.
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7/18/2025 7:45:13 PM # 1.0.0
Life is just not Fair...just square