Thursday, July 27, 2023

Take Me With You Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm holding on for dear life,
I just sit here in my chair flying a kite,
People get to run around,
I just want to feel the wind in my face and hair,
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Lauren Coles
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Sandra Feldman 20 November 2024

Full marks for this sentimental and extraordinary masterpiece!

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Sandra Feldman 20 November 2024

Such a remarkable poem! Fills the soul, every word engraves in the heart. Unforgettable from top to end. Painfully beautiful, not one word will be forgot

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Anjandev Roy 20 November 2024

This is absolutely brilliant..... thanks for sharing.....

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M. Asim Nehal 28 July 2023

Great imageries, nice flow, I liked it 5***

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