The weight put on my back
Is causing my spine to crack,
The tears I bleed everynight
Is not a pretty sight.
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i feel sad for whatever happened with you.. but i just loved your poem.. very well written.. all i say is never giveup your talent.. keep writing..
I really like to read your work for you write so well. Yet I feel such terrible pain for you. To live like this is just so wrong you have so much strength yet home, you do not belong. It is not a home. Take good care.
I live your poem. I can relate. I've never been abused like that but i understand pain and being terrified and i felt the poem. Keep writing! I've nevr related to a poet as much as you. Thank u! It lets me know i'm not alone