Thursday, March 7, 2019

Take Me To The Beach Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wish I could go back to that time
We were sitting on the warm sandy beach
Overlooking the tranquil turquoise Spanish sea
Light wind brushed my hair onto my face
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Jennifer Birchall
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Clinton Siegle 25 May 2019

memories, a painting painted with words.. remember.. enjoy..

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Julia Luber 23 March 2019

She tells how it's easier to fall in love in a 'perfect romantic' environment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 March 2019

Love and art! ! That moment made me fall in love with you. πŸ˜πŸ€—β˜ΊπŸ˜€ Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 March 2019

o dear its pacified sea tranquil breeze serenade beach we're on the rosy stalk face to face vice verse the setting sun in your eye mirror the nearby green grove in your eye mirror the blue sea in your eye mirror the white sky in your eye mirror and I, the love entangles everything

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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