Take Me To Paradise 2 Comments
Take me to Paradise where dreams come true.
Take me to Paradise and make me a woman.
Take me to Paradise where my joy knows no bounds.
Take me to Paradise where ecstasy awaits me.
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Good poem. My only suggestion, if you please, is that you use the phrase " Take me to paradise" in the first and last lines and let all the other float in between for impact Take me to paradise, where dreams come true And make me a woman ================= ================== My theatre of dreams Take me to paradise I think this way its...boom!
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8/2/2025 3:36:53 AM # 1.0.0
Thank you so much for your candid suggestion and your vivid comments.