Tuesday, June 16, 2009

Take Me There Comments

Rating: 5.0

Take me to that place,
where we can be alone.
With silence all around,
It's all we've ever known.
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mikayla carpenter
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Tracey Wynn 29 June 2009

You have the skill to write poetry and this poem is very good.

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George F. Hunter 19 June 2009

I like this poem. Nice structure, rhythm and rhyming.

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Anju Addanki 19 June 2009

HI It was a short one but nice one. Thought i felt u caould have added a para or two more. Like after i read i feltoh a short one wish it was long.

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