Take Me; Leave Me Comments

I really like this poem - you're not afraid to die, are you? I feel much the same way, in the sense that I don't want people to mourn for me when I am gone. Your poem floats so well, and the couple word lines make you think, and focus on those exact words to understand the full power. It's very simple, but quite complex in nature because of the idea behind it. Wonderful poem, A-B. Love and Sunshine, -L.C.