Take me back to yesterday
When holiness trumped prosperity
When churches won souls
Not the craze for numbers and money
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think this is best poem is ever read here. I swear. love ittt
A fine and lofty verse written with clarity of thought and mind. Soulful and so beautifully expressed. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched, Raimi.
By and large, I agree with your observations. Dubious progress. Isn't it? Thanks & Congrats.
Enhanced influence of consumerism and dwindling moral standards have made life of modern man corrupt in many ways. Thus, a desire to get back yester years that respected moral values and detested corrupt practices. Well deserved poem of the Day, Congrats.
Take me back to yesterday Where politicians served us We looked up to them Today, the table is turned.. a very good poem stating the facts of life now. tony
'Not the craze for numbers and money'! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
What you reveal in fourth stanza creates a strong base to cuddle your expression in the Second stanza! A very creditable piece of poetry! Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!
let's go back a slight let's go back with a light let's go back to fetch the hidden bright let's go back to guide our upcoming quarrelsome stride
Yes! Old was gold! A beautiful poem. It is possible to go back in the past. We need to make a full turn and name that direction as the forward. You penned well, poet! We think alike in this. Congrats. ++++10
Take me back to yesterday Where we rubbed organic You call it Coconut oil I call it " Adi Agbon" Where we wore " Shuku" in all shades And adorned in beautiful beads wonderful great write on the culture
A great groovy poem of the day. Congrats, Raimi for being chosen.....10++++++++++++++
Great and inspiring.