Take me away to a lovely place,
where the skies are dark and blue,
stars shining bright in the dark of night;
Take me away to a lovely place.
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I do love well-done repetition- -it carries atmosphere, a rhythm of its own. a roundness to the poem. And I enjoyed the scenery in this journey
One of the most romantic poems on love and nature. Congrats Reema . Beautiful start
Beautiful love poem, well articulated and nicely penned in good rhyme scheme from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Reema.
Great poem of longing, vivid imagery, my favorite from 4 poems you posted so far. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem... this is the first comment for my poem on this forum and means a lot to me....
I do love well-done repetition- -it carries atmosphere, a rhythm of its own. a roundness to the poem. And I enjoyed the scenery in this journey. Beautiful write! !