Thursday, March 14, 2019

Take Me Away To A Lovely Place Comments

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Take me away to a lovely place,
where the skies are dark and blue,
stars shining bright in the dark of night;
Take me away to a lovely place.
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Reema Kawatra
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Susan Williams 24 March 2019

I do love well-done repetition- -it carries atmosphere, a rhythm of its own. a roundness to the poem. And I enjoyed the scenery in this journey. Beautiful write! !

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Susan Williams 24 March 2019

I do love well-done repetition- -it carries atmosphere, a rhythm of its own. a roundness to the poem. And I enjoyed the scenery in this journey

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Dr Ratan Bhattacharjee 15 March 2019

One of the most romantic poems on love and nature. Congrats Reema . Beautiful start

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Chinedu Dike 14 March 2019

Beautiful love poem, well articulated and nicely penned in good rhyme scheme from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Reema.

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C F 14 March 2019

Great poem of longing, vivid imagery, my favorite from 4 poems you posted so far. Thank you for sharing.

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Reema Kawatra 14 March 2019

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem... this is the first comment for my poem on this forum and means a lot to me....

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