Take Me Away Comments

Brilliant representation....thank u, dear poet...

Such a brilliant write.....thank u, dear poet.

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Fly into the newer environs we may but as for now just take me away today now or any day Time evades none.... beautifully poem../

Fly into the newer environs we may but as for now just take me away today now or any day Time evades none......///

Let him embalm me if he does so wish fry me like a fish butcher me like a lamb take the toll of sacrifice as much as he can after all I too am human never to live till time's sunset nor the twilight before the eerie night...///

Just take me away to the far fold distant horizons where in the open battlefields of God I play unknown even to Almighty who rules beyond eternity my infinity......into infinity..//

Take me through the forests burning and pull me as fast as you can let the fires scald my wings or take a chance how the blazes over looked the innocent me.... beautiful rhyme /

Take me away from the environs where I now stay like in a desert on an isolated island far from the touch of neighbours six feet away Under the taps washing hands and face.....10+++

Very Beautiful and hopeful. Bravo! Please read my latest

Take me away This is the most loved poem of the day so many have commented why haven't you

This is a very beautiful composition. Words are beautiful. Admirations and appreciations Sir.

Reality of this present time..nicely written.tone of this poem is slightly different from the past ones..10+++

O take me Take me away Take me far away Before the sun rising Before the moon setting down Before the sleeping of love Before the kiss by the lipstick Before the undressing Before the touching deeply O take me away Take me me far away From this covid-19 deaths From this crude hands of vaccine, mask, sanitizer Take me far away To unknown palace Even unknown to god of death To live as eternal young....

Fly into the newer environs we may but as for now just take me away today now or any day......superb write... I feel this poem as an escapist

Take me through the forests burning and pull me as fast as you can let the fires scald my wings. this is a very good poem wonderful imagination dear poet. wish you well always. tony