Thursday, April 12, 2012

Take Me Away Comments

Rating: 5.0

You've held my hand, and kissed my lips
Sent jolts of lightning, through my fingertips

Love has combined, with the hatred within
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Champion Chris
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 24 July 2012

a nice romantic poem with good Rhyming always takes my attention. Perfect work Chris. C.A

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 April 2012

For me a bizarre feeling un-describable..meaningfully helical enjoyed much..tenner In MPL wow ~ niv PS Please comment on my poem 'I Want To Be Raped' [14 words poetry]..PH banned it ultimately gave in. n

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Romeo Della Valle 20 April 2012

I fully agree with Bella Hernandez, your are really gifted and have a ways with penning words that clearly bring beauty and talent magically blended in each one of your works! 10+++ Thank you for sharing this wonderful writhe and keep it up! This your stepping stone toward the top of the Poetry World one day! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Bella Hernandez 16 April 2012

OMG! ! ! ! such beauty, love, passion, witthin this perfected poem! ! ! i love this whole poem! ! ! its on my fav list :) you are a really great poet from what i read so far... i am humble to read upon perfection! ! ! ~Bella

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Jasmine Lynn 16 April 2012

this is very beautiful. thanks for sharing. keep writing chris

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Sara Fielder 12 April 2012

I like this Chris. Especially the ending. Your poems are maturing. Feeling loved is the greatest source of joy anyone can possibly experience. It helps us to get right down into the core of our being and understand what makes us tick...so let it flourish while it can!

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Jennifer Chalk 12 April 2012

What a beautiful poem, thanks for sharing it with us all.

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